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I have written some words! And put them together in a unique arrangement! And some of them make sense!

I wrote some of this a while ago, then ran out of steam. I was looking at it this morning and decided to add some more, and after a few hours was done.

The story isn't finished yet; I've still got to write a bridging scene between the previous part and this part, the ending. We'll see how many more months it takes me to write that.

Previous part of the story is here; first part of the story is here.

2797 words )
nelc: Possibly a Glock 28 in Hello Kitty colours (Glock)
I wrote 850 words on the Z-Team story this morning, but they don't follow on directly from the previous words. I was having trouble with visualising the next bit of the narrative, so at my subconsciousness' prompting I decided to skip ahead to the end.

Rather than confuse the narrative by putting these new words up now, I'm going to delay until I've got a fix on the end and can figure out how to get there. This is just a note to tease reassure that I've not given up on the story if nothing appears here for a few more days.

Edit: Wrote another 700 words around lunchtime.
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Previous part is here.

First part is here.

This part begins with an edit to the final line of the last part (I thought the original line was a bit cheesy on further thought), so it's going to jump a bit if you read it all straight through. It all makes sense in the version on my hard-disk, though.

Part 5 )

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820 words today/5850 words total

Totally miserable pace, I should just sit and write more. I blame XKCD.

Edit: Next part is here.
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More, more words. Where are they coming from?

Part 1 (2600 words) is here.

Part 2 (700 words) is here

Part 3 (800 words) is here.

Part 4 )

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890 words/5060 total

Bit chatty, this part. More action soon.

Edit: Added a line about Williams' reaction.

Edit: Minor additions to the para about Deveraux's Unit.

Edit: Next part is here.
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More words. First couple of thousand words of the story is here, latest batch follows the cut:

More words )

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700 words today, 3350 total so far.

As always, crit is welcome; this is the first creative writing I've done in ages, and I've no idea what this looks like to someone not in my skull.

Edit: Next part is here.

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